A long time ago a Toa was born from a stone. On the stone it said "Hacka". It was his name! He didn't have weapons or armor.
He was born from a white stone. He saw 3 brown stones. That was strange, because all the other stones were white. A strange, spiteful creature popped out of one of the brown stones. It was green and spiny. It chased Hacka and the Matorans into a jungle.
6 comments:
What happens next?
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Hello John!!
Now this looks like a wonderful story(as long as it has a good ending, right?)If a creature popped out of one of the three brown stones, what kind of scary things may be in the other two brown stones. I hope the green spiny creature doesn't catch Hacka and the Matorans. That wouldn't be very good. I can't wait to see what happens next. Bye for now. Love Grams and Gramps.
Hey John,
That is an awesome beginning to your story! I can't wait to read what comes next!
Luv Teenager
Looking forward to seeing what happens in the next chapter!
Love Dad
Hi John:
I'm so glad you shared your story. I know that Bionicles interest you more than anything else in the whole wide world right now. What will happen next? What is that strange, spiteful creature?
Looking forward to part 2.
Love Grandma and Grampa
Oooh. What happens next? That strange and spiteful creature is making me nervous.
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