Sunday, April 13, 2008

John's Bionicle Story; Part 3

Even though Hacka was ready to fight, something horrible happened to the Matorans that were still in that place. They got turned into slaves, and whenever that spiky creature threw a ball at one of the Matoran slaves they turned into evil, mindless creatures that don't care what they destroy. They just cared about destroying everything in their way, and Hacka was in their way.

They tripped him, but Hacka jumped. Another one was trying to eat the wall, but it was too hard. Hacka accidentally landed on his head. Hacka jumped to the throne. He took the spiky creature's ball shooter and reversed it so that he could turn the Matorans back. He shot a ball at every one of the slaves and they turned back into Matoran (except for the one who was eating the wall). Then Hacka threw the spiny creature off his throne. He landed on the floor next to the throne.

Now the fight was on! But something else strange happened, Hacka didn't even have to fight him. Fire was burning up the place, and the spiky creature was the element ice, so he melted. But before he melted completely he scraped his name on a piece of ice. Hacka quickly picked it up. It said Thok.

Then a pointy creature came. He was red, and anything he touched in that ice kingdom melted. He took over the castle. He must have hatched from the third brown stone and he had started the fire. Hacka was too busy trying to stop the Matoran from eating the walls to stop the red guy.

Meanwhile in the place where hacka had been born from a stone, 3 more brown stones appeared.

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

Man...three more stones appeared...? What's going to happen next?
This is a really great story and I can't wait!
Love, Dad

Anonymous said...

Hi John. This is a great continuing story. You always wonder what will happen next. I can't wait to see what happens with the three brown stones. More action and suspense. Exciting!! Bye for now.

Grams & Gramps

Teenager said...

Awesome story John,
You're super creative! I love it!
I can't wait to read more!
Love Teenager