Sunday, April 13, 2008

John's Bionicle Story; Part 5

Now I'm going to describe that black creature's name first. It is Ridak. He ran away from the Matoran castle and got lost in a desert. The Matorans thought he was friendly, and they were worried about him, so they sent out a search party for him. Hacka was one of the first guys they called for the job. Hacka looked in oceans, but all he found was a shark. He had to wrestle with the shark. He looked in rivers, but all he found was a crocodile. He had to wrestle with the crocodile too. He looked in different deserts and even in the jungle. Finally he looked in that desert and found Ridak. Hacka said, "Come on, let's go out of here!" But Ridak just looked amazed at the cactus. He picked up the cactus and started whacking the sand with it. Hacka was camouflaged with the sand. So Ridak was whacking Hacka. But a three eyed person could see well, so he soon saw that it was a Toa. So he whacked Hacka even more and even harder.

Hacka was annoyed and confused. Suddenly he got too annoyed, so he started looking at him with a mad face. Then Hacka left to go home, but Ridak was following him. Hacka figured out that Ridak wanted a battle. Then Hacka started whacking Ridak's cactus with another cactus. It turned into a light sabre duel except with cactus. Then Ridak got bored of using his cactus and looked for a harder weapon. He found a one sided drill kind of thing, and on the other side was a spinning thing with sharp points. It was dangerous, but Hacka had dangerous weapons too. So they started battling with those weapons. It looked like Ridak was going to win because he had good fighting skills. But finally Ridak got so tired that he fell down. Hacka carried him back to the Matoran castle.

Then finally Ridak awoke. He tried biting Hacka's hand so he would let go of him. Hacka let go. Ridak landed on the ground. He made a sandstorm so it would be hard for Hacka to find his way back, but in the sandstorm Ridak was a bit lighter than Hacka, so he blew away up to a black hole and was never seen again until he landed in the castle, but the Matorans locked him up quickly, and with all the chains they had.

There were still 2 more brown stones.

3 comments:

Teenager said...

This is a great story John. It's really exciting. You have an awesome imagination.
Love Teenager

Anonymous said...

Hi John. The chapters keep getting better and better. Great job at telling this story. I bet the cactus hurt a bit, especially the ones with the long sharp spikes. I bet the spinning drill thing could do a lot of damage too. Looks like everyone didn't get hurt too bad. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Gramps

Anonymous said...

Wow John,
this story is so interesting. You are doing a great job telling it!
luv banana