Friday, May 9, 2008

John's Bionicle Story; Part 6

Hacka was still stuck in the sand storm, then he blew away too. Many things from the Matoran castle also blew away in the sandstorm. Floating in the air was kind of relaxing, so he fell asleep. When he woke up he was in the ocean, and surrounded by 6 million sharks!!! Hacka took off one of his legs, and threw it. All the 6 million sharks headed straight at it, and Hacka started to swim away, but then he saw something else coming towards him. It was something blue that looked so much like a shark, but not exactly. It had double spike thingys on his back. Hacka groaned because he thought this creature would be dangerous too. He held out one of his new weapons so the creature might get scared away. Then he noticed the creature was really little. The creature just gave him his leg back. Hacka was so confused!

Hacka dove down deep in the ocean, and caught 6 million fish and gave them to all the sharks. He caught one really special fish for the creature who just gave his leg back, and gave it to him. Hacka and the creature became friends.

As the creature was trying to swim along in the ocean, he got zapped by electricity. After he got shocked, he became bigger and meaner looking, and his talons became sharper! Then he ran away from the ocean. Hacka followed him to see where he was going. He was worried about his friend. When they finally stopped they were at the Matoran castle again. The blue creature pushed every Matoran in his way. Then he went to where the stones were. There was only one left. The creature remembered who was in there. He smashed the stone, and a brown three eyed creature came out. Together they ran back to Hacka.

Hacka didn't want to hurt his friend, so he ran away, but they chased him up a mountain and into a volcano. Hacka thought he was going to die!

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Wow. That was scary when Hacka was into the ocean and the sharks came. It could have been the end for him then. Luckily the creature found his leg and gave it back to him.
I hope Hacka doesn't die in the volcano. That wouldn't be good. I can't wait to see what happens when the creature and the brown three eyeed creature catch up to Hacka. Bye for now.

Gramps

Anonymous said...

Hi John. I was wondering if the story was still going I can't wait to see if Hacka makes it out of the volcano. And by the way, thanks for the great card. You did a wonderful job on it.

Gramps